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Blue-Eyed by ~theories-unspoke:icontheories-unspoke:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Song




Still as moonlight
Deep in a night storm
My vision- Sorrow
Petals at dawn

If once I were blue-eyed
A victim, a tear
So sadly I'd fall
To my knees

Shouts close behind me
Circling concern
Would loosen my chest
Like the sun through the air

If once I were blue-eyed
A victim in tears
So tightly I'd cling
To embrace
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Submitted: March 8, 2006
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Ever since I was very little, I have never seemed to fully except being the victim, when I was at times. Sometimes I feel I needed to.
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=Bark:iconBark: Mar 8, 2006, 2:33:59 PM
beautiful... i can hear the music...

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~Autumn-Forest:iconAutumn-Forest: Mar 8, 2006, 4:08:16 PM
This is so beautiful. I'm actually a little misty. *sniffle*

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~theories-unspoke:icontheories-unspoke: Mar 9, 2006, 5:57:20 AM
Thank you (: A favorite from you is.. really very nice to have (:

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~theories-unspoke:icontheories-unspoke: Mar 9, 2006, 5:58:48 AM
aw (:

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~Aeshin:iconAeshin: Mar 9, 2006, 7:51:19 AM
oooo I love reading it!

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~Autumn-Forest:iconAutumn-Forest: Mar 9, 2006, 4:07:14 PM
hehe, :)

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I'll heal your wounds, I'll set you free, I'm Jesus Christ on ecstasy....
~doubtingthomas:icondoubtingthomas: Mar 13, 2006, 12:54:06 AM
It sounds like it ought to be sung in Japanese and used in a melancholy anime. Or maybe I'm just saying that because my flatmate plays anime music all the time. In any case, it's rather sweet.

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[I'm gonna reclassify your topological genus, mothafucka.]
~BabaDraconis:iconBabaDraconis: Apr 8, 2006, 1:09:07 PM
This is really emotive. You do have music to this, right?

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~theories-unspoke:icontheories-unspoke: Apr 20, 2006, 6:17:27 AM
Yes, and thank you. (:

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